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== It's enough already ==
 
== It's enough already ==
 
It's nice that you are doing all this work and trying to put some color into the creature articles, but you are putting in way too many errors and confusing things, too - a creature is predatory if it's in the raws, if not, not. This actually matters for game behaviour, too. Real world info, that is not found in the raws too, goes into a separate sentence at the bottom. The raws can be viewed from right in the article, btw. Lastly, watch the grammar and spelling a bit more. For a start, here are a few periods, articles and pronouns for use .....,the,the,the,a,a,an. --[[User:Birthright|Birthright]] 21:48, 10 September 2009 (UTC)
 
It's nice that you are doing all this work and trying to put some color into the creature articles, but you are putting in way too many errors and confusing things, too - a creature is predatory if it's in the raws, if not, not. This actually matters for game behaviour, too. Real world info, that is not found in the raws too, goes into a separate sentence at the bottom. The raws can be viewed from right in the article, btw. Lastly, watch the grammar and spelling a bit more. For a start, here are a few periods, articles and pronouns for use .....,the,the,the,a,a,an. --[[User:Birthright|Birthright]] 21:48, 10 September 2009 (UTC)
 
Sorry. I didn't check the raws, because I thought sharks would be predatory by standard. My bad. I have allways had difficulties using articles, because my native tongue doesn't use them at all... I'll try to improve. --[[User:Fastjack|Fastjack]] 11:10, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
 

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